My Reflection on My Literacy Narrative :)

Writing about my brother was harder than I thought it was going to be. His passing has always been very hard on me and I usually don't like to talk about it. But I felt like writing about it now would help me break through that barrier. Of course, I got choked up writing this paper, so I would have to take a break, regain my focus, and then come back to it later. Overall, I feel like I did a good job on my literacy narrative. I followed MLA format and my paragraphs flowed nicely. I am OCD when it comes to things like that. I make sure that everything looks perfect with everything that I do. I think I did a good job on portraying imagery and the emotions that I felt during that time. The only thing I feel like I could have done better on was my last two paragraphs. I've always been terrible at endings, so trying to come up with a good ending for my paper was hard. I honestly don't think that my ending was strong enough for my paper, but I tried my best. I definitely need to work on endings and things of that nature in the future. Other than that, I feel that I did a good job and did everything that was asked of me.