Monday, January 28, 2013

Essay 1 Rough Draft! ((:

***I apologize in advance about this rough draft. Emphasis on ROUGH haha! :)***



Ashley Lewis

Instructor Thomas

English 102

01 February 2013

Angel:

A Look Inside the BCSPCA Video

            We have all seen the commercials for BCSPCA: images of abused animals with sad eyes, the song, “Angel,” playing in the background, and Sarah McLachlan pleading for donations that way animal cruelty can be stopped. Every time that commercial comes on our televisions, we automatically want to change the channel, but there is a part of us that wants to keep watching. We want to be able to jot down that phone number or web address so we can help the innocent animals. That is exactly what BCSPCA wants their audience to do. In this commercial, BCSPCA and Sarah McLachlan creatively use heart wrenching word choice and excellent metaphors to beef up the logos, ethos, and pathos, which lures the audience into donating money and stopping animal abuse.

            BCSPCA’s overall goal in this commercial is to raise money and put an end to animal cruelty. Multiple times you hear Sarah McLachlan say to, “Call the number on your screen…with a monthly gift right now.” As heartbreaking as the commercial is, they are trying to raise money and BCSPCA makes sure to pound that into the audience’s head. By donating money to them, one less animal will be abused and that is exactly what we, as the audience, wants. Also, during a majority of the commercial, the audience notices a phone number and web address at the bottom of the screen. BCSPCA does this that way it will be the last thing the audience remembers as soon as the commercial goes off. The audience will rush to their phones and donate whatever they can so they can help end animal cruelty, which is exactly the purpose of the whole commercial.

            BCSPCA appeals to the audience’s sense of knowledge by stating astonishing facts about animal abuse. At the very beginning of the video, a text pops up that reads, “Every single hour in BC, an animal is violently abused.” Most people are stunned by this fact. But by BCSPCA stating this, they are proving their credentials. A fact like this is something that BCSPCA knows and researches every day. It is their job to know facts such as this. And again, having their phone number and web address on the screen also proves their credentials. This is all their information which also contributes to their credentials.

            BCSPCA definitely gets their audience by pulling on their heartstrings. The first thing McLachlan asks the audience is, “Will you be an angel for a helpless animal?” McLachlan metaphorically calls the audience angels, which covers her request for money and flatters the audience at the same time. And of course, the audience wants to feel like angels by doing a good deed; donating money to BCSPCA makes the audience feel benevolent. The word choice used in this commercial also plays a big part in why it gets to the audience’s heart. One particular sentence used in the commercial was worded like this: “Every day, innocent animals are abused, beaten, and neglected; and they’re crying out for help.” The words abused, beaten, and neglected appeals to the audience’s sense of melancholy and rage. No sane person wants to hear about a poor animal being beaten or neglected. Hearing words like that hurts the audience’s heart and at the same time, makes them want to hunt down all the abusers and do terrible things to them. For me, it hurts to watch this commercial because it makes me want to scoop up all of the animals and bring them home with me. But that is exactly the kind of reaction BCSPCA is trying to get out of their audience. If the audience is riled up enough, they will want to call in, donate money, and put a stop to animal abuse.

            BCSPCA does a great job achieving their purpose with their commercial. Millions of people donate to BCSPCA all the time, which is what they want. Of course, animal abuse is still an ongoing problem, but at least with commercials like this, light is being shed on it and things are being done to stop it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Works Cited

Ragefc. “Sarah McLachlan Animal Cruelty Video.” Online video clip. YouTube. YouTube,           03 Oct. 2006. Web. 28 Jan. 2013.

 

           

 


 

          
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

           

 

Friday, January 25, 2013

Essay 1 Outline and Thesis! (:

  • Thesis Statement: In this video, BCSPCA and Sarah McLachlan creatively use heartwrenching word choice and excellent metaphors to beef up the logos, ethos, and pathos, which lures the audience into donating money and stopping animal abuse.
  • Outline
    • Intro Paragraph
      • Summarize BCSPCA video.
      • Thesis Statement.
    • 2nd Paragraph: Logos
      • Message of the video to raise money and stop animal abuse.
    • 3rd Paragraph: Ethos
      • Credentials of BCSPCA and Sarah McLachlan.
    • 4th Paragraph: Pathos
      • Word choice, metaphors, images, and sounds pull at the audience's heartstrings.
    • Conclusion Paragraph
      • Summarize what has been discussed.
      • Closing argurments.

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Basic Questions for Rhetorical Analysis! (:

 
In the ASPCA video, Sarah McLachlan is the spokesperson for this organization. But, the actual creator of the video is ASPCA. They probably chose McLachlan to be their spokesperson because she is an animal lover, not to mention, they use her song, “Angel,” in the video.  ASPCA's intention for this video is to stop animal cruelty and to receive donations from people. The logos, or overall message, of this video is to show people that animal cruelty, unfortunately, does exist and people need to come together to put an end to it. The target audience for this video, obviously, would be the animal lovers. They would be the first to put a donation in the mailbox because seeing images of abused animals would hurt their heart. As I’ve already stated, this is in the form of a video, which serves as a stronger appeal. If it was just a text, it most likely would not have the impact that is does. But with the images, music, and Sarah’s voice pleading you to help these animals, it actually sits with you and has more of an effect. The biggest rhetorical device used in this video would be the word choice. When Sarah talks, she mentions that animals are “abused, beaten, and neglected.” This is a form of pathos because it creates a sense of guilt and anger. Sarah also calls the people viewing “angels.” This is also pathos because it makes people feel like guardian angels to the helpless animals. Plus, McLachlan says this as a way to flatter her audience and get them to donate money. A form of ethos would be the web address and the phone number on the screen as the video plays. ASPCA want that to stick in people’s mind as they watch the images of the animals and it makes a person more likely to call and donate. The video definitely succeeds in getting ASPCA’s intentions across. Of course, there will always be animal cruelty, whether we like it or not. But with videos like these, it will definitely help decrease the number of animals being abused.

Friday, January 18, 2013

My Essay 1 Idea! :)


So for my writing assignment, I am going to do an ASPCA commercial. The title of this video is "Sarah McLachlan Animal Cruelty Video". I am not too sure who the author is (I'm assuming ASPCA?). The point of this video is that people should come together to stop animal abuse and to donate money, that could potentially save an animal's life. There is VERY strong pathos in this video, with the images of the abused animals and Sarah McLachlan's "Angel" playing in the background. There's ethos in here with the phone number and the website at the end of the video. Not too sure about logos though, so I will keep my eyes out for that one. Overall, this is what I will be writing my paper about. (It's going to take everything in me not to cry watching this video!)